TicPunch: Francene Animation and Dialogue could be better, but there are a lot of great ideas here. I really like this and hope to see more of it! Try to not just have the characters be in the same pose all the time, especially in a series like this where you're trying to have a lot of action and magical shenanigans. The dialogue sounded a little awkward at the beginning, especially the interaction with the dad.
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